tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-352067271174527510.post8664995988278144439..comments2009-01-25T06:39:25.835-08:00Comments on Year 6 Writing SWPS 2008-2009: Replies to Matthias the alienVCOP Teacherhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01698608136545626686noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-352067271174527510.post-59615821130200496592008-09-18T10:44:00.000-07:002008-09-18T10:44:00.000-07:00This letter is very informative.although she strug...This letter is very informative.<BR/>although she struggled a bit with her ideas and i know because she sits next to me in class.<BR/>so once again well done bexter.Bulgingbrainiac1https://www.blogger.com/profile/01129038810929715023noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-352067271174527510.post-63432658198687779002008-09-06T12:52:00.000-07:002008-09-06T12:52:00.000-07:00I was impressed by the varied use of connectives i...I was impressed by the varied use of connectives in this letter Rebecca, what a great start to the year!Poppy1978https://www.blogger.com/profile/16933098910338699633noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-352067271174527510.post-30755111851671162622008-09-06T04:52:00.000-07:002008-09-06T04:52:00.000-07:00Thank you for your comment - I am sure it will cer...Thank you for your comment - I am sure it will certainly help Rebecca to improve her writing.VCOP Teacherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01698608136545626686noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-352067271174527510.post-6555738752810218572008-09-06T04:40:00.000-07:002008-09-06T04:40:00.000-07:00Hi Rebecca, glad you described earth as cool. I li...Hi Rebecca, glad you described earth as cool. <BR/>I liked the way you started with a friendly comment and said straight away that you came from Southampton. Also way you praised the aliens letter as being very interesting. <BR/><BR/>Think you could have added a bit more detail to the parks and clubs part as im sure that would have added interest.Kazzyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15055989148902103348noreply@blogger.com