tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-352067271174527510.post5947263605497042260..comments2009-01-25T06:39:25.835-08:00Comments on Year 6 Writing SWPS 2008-2009: Replies to Matthias the alienVCOP Teacherhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01698608136545626686noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-352067271174527510.post-61227678575882895882008-09-18T10:49:00.000-07:002008-09-18T10:49:00.000-07:00coolit is very good an informativecool<BR/>it is very good an informativeBulgingbrainiac1https://www.blogger.com/profile/01129038810929715023noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-352067271174527510.post-1769298825832587192008-09-06T12:57:00.000-07:002008-09-06T12:57:00.000-07:00Hi Derek, what a great letter! You included lots ...Hi Derek, what a great letter! You included lots of information in a clear and straightforward way. I especially liked the way you started with the positive points of our planet - there are many of them! Keep up the great work!Poppy1978https://www.blogger.com/profile/16933098910338699633noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-352067271174527510.post-15042916601075286712008-09-06T09:30:00.000-07:002008-09-06T09:30:00.000-07:00Well done with creating a really welcoming & f...Well done with creating a really welcoming & friendly letter to Matthias, Derek! You've included lots of ideas to spark Matthias' interest in our planet from radio & the weather to songs & oxygen. I'd love to read a little more of your ideas about these things & I'm sure Matthias would feel the same way.sal26https://www.blogger.com/profile/16866968323022745932noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-352067271174527510.post-6372453679773864592008-09-06T05:17:00.000-07:002008-09-06T05:17:00.000-07:00I think Derek might actually become quite famous t...I think Derek might actually become quite famous this year - his interview on Radio Warren was fantastic!<BR/>He got a Head's Special you know!VCOP Teacherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01698608136545626686noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-352067271174527510.post-89281266568207155002008-09-06T05:11:00.000-07:002008-09-06T05:11:00.000-07:00Well done Derek - I really enjoyed your letter. I...Well done Derek - I really enjoyed your letter. I'm glad you are enjoying writing - your teacher played me your interview on Radio Warren - I hope one day you can build a house for me too!! <BR/>Keep up the excellent work!dazza dhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07176134023211272739noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-352067271174527510.post-60145586757588891342008-09-06T05:05:00.000-07:002008-09-06T05:05:00.000-07:00I'm so glad to be Derek's teacher! I certainly thi...I'm so glad to be Derek's teacher! I certainly think he has great potential as a writer. He has also been interviewed for Radio Warren - quite a star!VCOP Teacherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01698608136545626686noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-352067271174527510.post-20065851498404340132008-09-06T04:51:00.000-07:002008-09-06T04:51:00.000-07:00Derek loved your letter. Short and to the point bu...Derek loved your letter. Short and to the point but getting all key points in.<BR/>Think mentioning radio and songs was a good thing too as music is something that sets people apart from most animals and aliens might not know about that. They might want to know more about that.<BR/>I look forward to reading more of you work keep it up.Kazzyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15055989148902103348noreply@blogger.com